Review for Harry's Second Chance

Harry's Second Chance

(#) jbstarnes1 2006-07-07 04:24:33 PM

"Harry had given some hints that his information was very much insider trading, in which goblins were firm believers."

Your stories tend to be a little overly clinical, making it hard for any kind of emotional connection, but every so often you come up with a killer line, and that's one of them.

Author's response

Thanks, I liked that line, too,

"T"

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