Review for Like Some Song You Can't Unlearn
(#) HautFeuMaudit 2007-08-13 02:19:29 PM
But I don't think the story has progressed much in this chapter, there is not much time between the two last chapters, perhaps you could haste it a bit.
On another point, will the other teachers or even Dumbledore ask Harry about his teaching of light/dark ? What will they think of it ?
Finally, I would like to congrulate you for on your story and let you know that I will continue to read it and, I hope, like it.
P.S. : Sorry if I made grammar mistakes, but I'm french, so english isn't my native language ^^.
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