Review for Like Some Song You Can't Unlearn
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-08-13 03:50:16 PM
You seem to have some serious formatting problems concerning apostrophes and quotation marks. Check out the chapter to find out for yourself. That's why I always submit my stories in .txt format.
Lastly, PLEASE don't incorporate the DH Snape/Lily thing. I agree with you that it doesn't justify his character at all (he still deserves a slow and painful death), but I can't help but feel like it's unnecessary and irritating. Still, so long as you keep Snape as you say, I'll have no real complaints.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
As for the format thing, yeah, I need to work out the issues. I normally write in word and simply cut/paste into Ficwad but I will have to work on this a bit. BJH
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