(#) chady 2007-08-13
I can say this is one of my favorite harry in a different time story. I have read several, and it seems that without even a day going bye everyone knows that he is in a different world, or that he acts all wimpy. Honestly your story story while I havn't read your first couple chapters in a while I think it refreshing how you are writing it. I am glad that you are promising to cut down on the preachness of it. while I do believe in the book the dark magic has more to do with intent to do harm rather than the purpose of the spell. Still you do have a point, I am just glad you are going to include more action. Please update soon i do enjoy reading this story.