Review for Second Best

Second Best

(#) Shaggy37 2006-07-08

awesome story, you got the character of Snape down pat, he would definitely be happy that he got one over on Ron or Harry for that matter, anyways time for the grammer error correcting and sorry in advance: Suddenly he felt a big like a prat, it should be: Suddenly he felt like a big prat, just thought I would tell ya, still a very nice story, do keep up the awesome work:):):):)