(#) BenRG 2007-08-31
Well, that was an unexpected ending. Although I really can't see Hermione turning out to be an agressive dominating woman (in terms of controlling others), it is not out of character given her bossy "I know best" attitude.
Ginny was the only one really OOC as far as I can tell. It really doesn't seem to match her personality for her to submit so totally to humiliation, even if it means getting Harry.
Overall, a more adult view of what would happen at the end of the tale. Certainly worth the read.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
Author's response
I agree that, of course, this Ginny is 'different', but really, canon!Ginny is (in my view) very much a cipher, who changes as needed. So I just changed her in a way I wanted, just like Rowling.
"T"