Review for Death, In Glory

Death, In Glory

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-09-01 12:43:59 PM

Absolutely brilliant start. The first chapter is cut completely short, so hopefully you'll be able to fix that at some point. Other than that, the only possible problem was Orestes' mention of using a wand. We've only seen staffs, spears and swords thus far, which is why I thought it might have been an error.

Eagerly awaiting both chapter 3 and the rest of chapter 1.

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