Review for The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

(#) noforcedlogins 2007-09-02

An interesting story so far. I'm not sure why Harry got Ron to go help him with the troll, they are not such famous friend as his many girlfriends.

It is interesting how Harry is uniteing the houses. Will his friendship be able to divert the darker aspects of the main timeline's future?

Please continue.

Author's response

Thanks for reading and commenting. To answer your question, that was one of the challenges I had when thinking up the relationships between characters. I wanted to keep Ron and Hermione in Harry's life just not feature parts. He's a bit more mindful because of his environment which led to wondering how Hermione was doing. He got Ron to help him because he blames Ron for putting Hermione in that situation and feels like he should redeem himself. Harry didn't tell anyone because he's 11 and didn't think about it. I wanted Harry to be diverse and be a lot more popular and around with the rest of the school. I hope I get a chance to explore this story fully.