Wow, Gwen. I just spent like 4 hours catching up on your story and I must say I'm more than impressed! Your writing absolutely astounding, and I think you capture Patrick just perfectly!
You had from the word your typed!
Amazing!!
I was literally jumping in my seat, just going crazy wondering what was going to happen next.
This chapter was perfect just like the rest. That one greasy dude was utterly creepy and I love the way you describe things!
Fucking Gold.
Seriously, you put my writing to shame!!
Anyways, now I have to wait like the rest, but it will be totally worth it!!
Update soon, pretty, pretty please?
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