This is wonderful. It sticks to canon and is so believable. This is my canon now! Severus is perfect and the line "I'm going to the beach" made me laugh!
How does one get to your other stories? For some reason I can't seem to be able to access them - they are ghosted and unaccessable.
Author's response
Thank you. I worked very hard to keep it in canon as well as keep Severus in character.
As for your other problem, you will need to change your specs on the left to -1. Apparently, I have attracted the attention of some unsavory people and I wondered why I wasn't getting hits. I just recently realized if it has a negative rating, your fic won't be seen unless you specifically request it. It's one of the things I dislike about the rating system here. All of my stuff is at Open Scrolls or AFF.