I enjoyed this. Well written and true to  the characters (- with one small exception; i think Mrs Bennett would now think  Elizabeth her favourite daughter. LOL
Congratulations, 
Jen
Author's response
LOL, perhaps you're right.  But I think there's a chance Mrs. Bennet would still gripe a little about Elizabeth almost letting such a matrimonial prize get away.  She never seems to be grateful for much of anything very long!  ;)