Review for Essence
(#) trollopfop 2005-08-16 09:23:39 PM
Two grammar nitpicks: First, "...you really really am..." "Are" would be grammatically correct. "...and the refusal will stay on your veins and poison you both..." Did you mean "in your veins"? Other than that, it's perfect. I'm adding this to my favorites.
/Author\'s Response: Thanks for the review! Obviously, Kazuki is the GB character I find most fascinating. So complex, hmm...And thanks especially for catching those errors. >_
Frank feels their friendship will never be complete, until he sees Gerard cry.
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