Review for Essence
Essence
(#) trollopfop 2005-08-16 09:23:39 PM
Beautiful. Just beautiful. I want to cry now. Poor Kazuki. pets him
Two grammar nitpicks: First, "...you really really am..." "Are" would be grammatically correct. "...and the refusal will stay on your veins and poison you both..." Did you mean "in your veins"? Other than that, it's perfect. I'm adding this to my favorites.
/Author\'s Response: Thanks for the review! Obviously, Kazuki is the GB character I find most fascinating. So complex, hmm...And thanks especially for catching those errors. >_
Two grammar nitpicks: First, "...you really really am..." "Are" would be grammatically correct. "...and the refusal will stay on your veins and poison you both..." Did you mean "in your veins"? Other than that, it's perfect. I'm adding this to my favorites.
/Author\'s Response: Thanks for the review! Obviously, Kazuki is the GB character I find most fascinating. So complex, hmm...And thanks especially for catching those errors. >_
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