wow, this is a pretty amazing piece of fanfiction. so well written and so, I dunno. Believeable? well, that's probably the word I'm looking for. this is umm... a one-shot? standalone? Just wondering seeing you didn't say anything about it.
'Oh sweet Jesus, this man talked to his lighters. What the hell would the music industry come up with next?'
seriously! that's a great line, that made me giggle. xD
I'm gonna favorite this story in case you update =) tihi..