Review for Stop. Rewind. Replay

Stop. Rewind. Replay

(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-09-30

haha, niiice
i like this, very original
but i think you shouldn't change up between first and third person quite so much. try doing it all in first, it seems suiting to the story

Author's response

ok, I'll give it a go. Let it never be said don't listen to you guys.
Although I may do two versions of chapter three. One all in first and one in first and third. :]