Fascinating story. I love the concept it's simply amazing. As for the story itself it is brilliant though I don't like Astinos being capable of doing magic I can live with it. The training of Spartans was wonderful . The explanation of magic was quite good.Leandros' character is done quite well he is a true Spartan even if he isn't from here. I look forward to more of Leonidas in the next chapter also I wonder what Gorgo thinks of Leandros I hope you address in the next chapter. I eagerly await your next chapter!