Review for Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) Cateagle 2007-10-07 09:13:28 AM
Ohh, just this portion so far is right delight. I love the way the two of them are playing into their preconceived notions and then finding them slowly eroded away by the reality of the other as they get to know them. Bravo!!
Now, there was one slight typo, "... a shit that ..." should really be, from context, "... a shirt that ...". Mind you, it's an amusing typo, but still ...
Now, there was one slight typo, "... a shit that ..." should really be, from context, "... a shirt that ...". Mind you, it's an amusing typo, but still ...
Author's response
laughs Sorry about that. Been working beta free through out this story. I go over it several times but being that its all still in my head a day or two later I'm not really seeing the errors.
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