Rita almost had me believing Voldie's tripe :). Harry buying Malfoy's manor at auction is too good. But Neville has to go after Little Miss Prissy Melissy. I didn't mention it before, but I think you've taken Dumbledore a little too far with her as Head Girl (under Snape in DH, perhaps she would be). I just don't see it. He's not quite that bumbling, is he? I'll have to wait and see what's up your sleeves doing that.