Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) folken77 2007-10-09 01:31:44 PM

Oh, c'mon! There's no way your Harry wold not kill Snape after he killed two of his bodyguards and nearly tried to kill HERMIONE of all people. If he doesn't find a way to kill him in the next chapter I would be so disapointed...

Other than that it was a great chapter, somewhat filler but necessary to introduce Voldemort and the conflict with Boss Zabini. Good Work!

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