this is my third review and im sry for reviewing so much..its just i love this story and i think you've been doing a great job..unlike me..anyways charactarization tips?..sure if i knew any..i know naruto up down side to side and all that(even things the show or stories never show)if u need anything u can ask me.and again..great job
Author's response
Thanks! ^^ If you see any flaws in characters please let me know.