Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Cateagle 2007-10-21 09:49:47 PM

chuckle The expanded version of chapter 4 is owrth it, just for Luna's explanations. I loved how Harry moved to meet the immediate problem he could handle and I especially loved Luna's comment about Hermione lacking imagination (I'd rather call it over reliance on the ceracity of authors, myself, but I digress). The reuniting of Hermione with her parents was very skillfully done by Luna and friends and it'll be interesting to see just how the decisions develop. Personally, I hope the decisions go in such a way as to maximize Luna's happiness as much as that of Harry & Hermione.

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Hopefully it works out for her, my outline has it doing so... but the damned actors start adlibing and the story stops paying attention to me...

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