Review for The Whirlpool

The Whirlpool

(#) ficklemuse 2006-07-16 02:52:56 PM

I really enjoyed the starkness of this story. I think my favorite line is -

"But even paper intentions were better than nothing at all."

this is such a different man than the one we see on the show, that if written differently it would scream 'Out of Character' but you show beautifully the inner workings of a disillusioned man. I can see how it evolved.

Very compelling stuff!

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