Review for The Whirlpool
(#) ficklemuse 2006-07-16 02:52:56 PM
"But even paper intentions were better than nothing at all."
this is such a different man than the one we see on the show, that if written differently it would scream 'Out of Character' but you show beautifully the inner workings of a disillusioned man. I can see how it evolved.
Very compelling stuff!
Harry escapes the summer before his fifth year, and comes back with a different attitude.
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