My, my!
Well, this story is certainly outstanding! I love it. The descriptions are amazing, the vocabulary is fantastic, and the plot is very orginal. The words flow together so nicely, I can almost feel the scene. Marvelous chapters, you have here. I give it two thumbs up, and if I had another hand, it'd be three thumbs. Okay, I'll stop rambling on about how awesome this is and leave you be. But you should continue this, because this is freakin' kick-ass. Update soon, love!