I Really Like This Story, But I Reckon there should be some sort of Unexpected Twist To it.
Mkae It More Exciting, Not That It Isnt ALready, But adding a few twists to it would make it Crazier,.
But i Love this and feel Bad for Bob, And on the otherhand, I Feel, Well Kind of bad for gerard but kind of Weird about the Whole situation.
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Author's response
i agree with you....
i mean i couold have guessed there was something wrong with it....
i guess i'lll think about it....
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