Review for you can keep my brother
you can keep my brother
(#) hopeanne 2007-10-30 12:26:00 PM
ugh. Liz.
I guess every story needs an evil bitch arch rival chick and thats Liz...
At least Sky realizes that shes trying to set her up...
And I love how you put that bit about his old leather jacket! I loved that jacket...
And that whole him carrying her off scene! I loved that! It was very cute. Like couple-y cute. They hardly have scenes like that. Like sweet scenes where theyre like touching! I know I said something like that before about like Sky not being all touchy feely but thats what this scene felt like... And it felt so comfortable too.
Like you couldve easily made this jacket thing escalate into like a major fight with crying and name calling but you kept it light hearted and I liked it..
Its another layer of their relationship that we havent really seen yet. I mean weve seen sky being silly with the other guys but not just her and G...
With her and G it seems more personal you know? more... intimate...
I really liked it.
I guess every story needs an evil bitch arch rival chick and thats Liz...
At least Sky realizes that shes trying to set her up...
And I love how you put that bit about his old leather jacket! I loved that jacket...
And that whole him carrying her off scene! I loved that! It was very cute. Like couple-y cute. They hardly have scenes like that. Like sweet scenes where theyre like touching! I know I said something like that before about like Sky not being all touchy feely but thats what this scene felt like... And it felt so comfortable too.
Like you couldve easily made this jacket thing escalate into like a major fight with crying and name calling but you kept it light hearted and I liked it..
Its another layer of their relationship that we havent really seen yet. I mean weve seen sky being silly with the other guys but not just her and G...
With her and G it seems more personal you know? more... intimate...
I really liked it.
Author's response
aw you really summarized what i feel for this chapter and what i wanted to convey so i'm pleased that i managed to pass what i wanted in this.
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0
Featured Story
-
The End of Pure England
by DrT (PG)What if the Purebloods had lost the war but ‘won’ the peace? A cranky one-shot plot bunny which ...
In: Harry Potter
Site Stats
- Authors: 198166
- Stories: 39139
Recent Stories
-
Reward and Punishment
by BrianJ (R)A kiss on the cheek? Fleur knows better than to think that's enough, and she's not the only one.
In: Harry Potter
-
Let's Just Sit Back And Watch This World Explode!
by Sarahkilljoykid (PG-13)Things are not what they seem... In a world that keeps changing, how do you know who can you trust?
-
Why would she be interested in you?
by BlueViolet_Mourning (PG-13)I set this when Brendon was in highschool. He meets new girl Trisha, but will she fall for the nerd ...
-
A proper appology for my absence
by Mikeyunicornrawr (G)Author's note type thing. Posted in the MCR section because that's usually where I post.
-
Reason why my story has no title
by AgentKilljoy (G)Explanation