Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) red_jacobson 2007-11-01

i'm enjoying this story a lot; and; can agree with the concern about Daphne and Hermione getting sweaty with each other right away. Granted, it's a hell of a lot of fun to write and read about; but ; without a valid reason or at least a build up in the story; it comes out as forced.

looking forward to more

red

Author's response

Oh, sure I like those movies as much as the next guy, but it doesn't fit Hermione's personality, in canon or my story...