Review for Harry Potter and Merlin's Reaper
Harry Potter and Merlin's Reaper
(#) DarkeGray 2007-11-01 07:47:31 PM
Wow, at first I didn't like this story. I had only read the first chapter and I didn't like the Luna you portrayed. Not that you didn't do it well, I just didn't like my vision of a blissfully serene Lune being destroyed like you did. But after these two chapters I have to say that I really love this story. The way you describe Harry being the reluctant hero with the women and the ruthless killer with the Death Eaters is awesome. The way you have Hermione and Susan and Fleur, I actually feel bad for them and what they had to go through. I also feel bad for the resistance, they had Harry, the most powerful wizard since Dumbles and they up and go against him? If I was the resistance I would be falling over myself trying to do whatever Harry wanted. They have lost an ally and I can't wait until they have a confrontation between them. Anyways, I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see more.
DG
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