Review for Harry Potter and Merlin's Reaper

Harry Potter and Merlin's Reaper

(#) Darth_Bobo 2007-11-02

YAY 3 chapters in one day... was a good distraction from work, thanks for that.

I didnt see Tonks coming either... and that rarely happens, your fic is just so different from most out there.

Keep up the good work.

Author's response

My original drafts had multiple examples of Mandy being very clusmy, then each of the other girls in turn being klutzes, and showing up from scene to scene in different clothes... It was a complete train wreck, only radical pruning produced what's left.