(#) Kitt 2007-11-04
Very well-written and in character. An interesting take on these characters' fates at the beginning of X-2. Baralai's narrative was flawless; I could actually picture his voice actor saying those words.
Someone already got you on the sentence fragment, but that's hardly a detraction. I tend to be a bit partial towards Baralai x Isaaru; I have a hard time seeing Baralai being straight. I'll be checking to see if you did anymore. :)