Review for 30 Seconds To Romance

30 Seconds To Romance

(#) crystalcrash 2007-11-07 04:32:23 AM

Aww, sweet and sad, the perfect mixture. But i think you should have made the end a little longer, the part where Gee commits suicide. I had to go back and read that bit again because i wasn't sure if he had really done it or not. A few more lines would have left it clearer. I liked the last one, by the way. =)

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