(#) Vanir 2007-11-17
The tone of this story reminds me of T&C, i my mind your second best. You have a Harry who takes things in stride, ever-faithful Hermione, who may not be quite clear on the extent of her own devotion, and a Ron, who can't see past his smudgy, freckled nose. Having read you a few times, I'm eagerly awaiting Luna. Feel free to borrow mine:-)
Which one do you like best? As for Luna, this Luna will be very different. Was Luna already way out there when she arrived at Hogwarts, or was she driven that way due to the extreme teasing and bullying? This is a shier Luna, away from her beloved father for the first time, and only knowing Ginny and sort of knowing Ron.