Review for Innocence Faded

Innocence Faded

(#) lycus 2007-11-17

Wow that was very...Wow i'm very impressed, I've read some epilouge stories that start out like yours but don't come close to how yours turned out. But harrys' sexual past was a little disturbing especally colin who was as much of a fanboy as ginny was a fangirl but all I ask is that you don't put as much or any detail in any flashbacks you might have in the slash department. Now I really hate ron, and I love stories that bash ron but I guess that ron is okay in this story, but I really think that ron might still feel guilty for running out on them on the horcrux hunt and feeling that he didn't get hermione on his own he might feel that someone had to cheat for him to be with her in the first place, and we all know that ron hates charity. Now who will hermione choose to be with? what will happen when the public finds out what the weasleys' did? what will the twins do when they find out that their siblings mother broke up their parents marrage? well you will just have to update now won't you, we have to know the answers, so update soon.

Author's response

I'm assuming you haven't read chapter two yet.

Don't worry about slash, I'll say again: I don't like slash unless your talking about the guitarist. Honestly, i did the bisexual past because I like Torchwood, and Capt. Jack is my favorite character on the show, I just remembered the story about the acrobats and I was inspired. As for Colin, A) he always struck me as a bit fruity, and B) let's say Harry was getting blueballs and was desperate.

As for Ron, I like him, except for his jealous/jackass streak. I like my explanation of what happened.