(#) X-Man 2007-11-17
Sounds like an interesting story, but calling Voldemort "Voldie", is a horrible cliche. It makes Harry sound real immature to resort to kiddie names.
Then theres the out of no where cussing.
I wonder if Luna is a guy...
Another thing I really don't want to read a story about Harry doing female verisons of male char. Its.... just sick.
Author's response
Bearing in mind that the Harry of this story is all of 14 years old, how mature do you want him to be?
What would you say to someone who was trying to kill you? "Sorry to be a bother old bean, would you mind terribly not using those nasty killing curses around me? They sting like no body's business. Gosh!" I try to write my characters like people speak, outside of monistaries Harry's cursing is completely within the bounds of how people in his situation speak.
No, she isn't. I checked.
I would advise you to avoid those fics then.