I like it. =D
Description and imagery are absolutely wonderful here. And I like how you place words together to make them flow so beautifully. Tis' quite an amazing piece. I'd like to read some more from you soon. =D
Author's response
wow, thanks so much for taking the time to review...
i just recently went to a fall out boy show, actually it was yesterday. :D point is, the guys are totally inspiring, so i may be putting some stuff up over there. i geuss it just depends on how much homework my teachers can throw at me and if my fingers can keep up with my brain. thanks again and ill definitley be checking some of your stuff out.
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