Review for Second Fiddle
(#) Terdwilicker 2007-11-19 08:51:17 PM
Interesting story. Needs a bit of editing, mainly for spelling/word-choice errors. You sometimes use singular words for plural and vice-versa, and many of your idioms... are wrong. Please get a Beta reader to go over your story, chapter by chapter, and fix all the problems. There's at least one per page of every chapter. Its distracting from otherwise good storytelling.
Bad word editor, bad.
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