Review for The Priss and the Idiot
The Priss and the Idiot
(#) phonet 2006-07-18 06:53:37 PM
Well this is rather nit-picky but in number 4 you wrote:
“Byakuya detest any mess.”
Should it not be Byakuya detested any mess (es)?
Well I wanted to call it to your attention, and other than that the story is magnificent. Love the Kaien, Byakuya friendship, quite original from what I’ve seen.
“Byakuya detest any mess.”
Should it not be Byakuya detested any mess (es)?
Well I wanted to call it to your attention, and other than that the story is magnificent. Love the Kaien, Byakuya friendship, quite original from what I’ve seen.
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