Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) sparky40sw 2007-11-24 07:40:12 AM

Excellent chapter - I like the overwhelming force method of intimidating Dumbles. I am a little less sanguine about incorporating the rogue elements from DH into the story - but it is likely that you will be able to make them more comprehensible than their originator did.
thanks for sharing your wonderful imagination and skill.
warm regards

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