Review for The Epic Saga of Natalia Lazarov

The Epic Saga of Natalia Lazarov

(#) TamerTerra 2005-08-28 01:53:44 PM

Though your dialouge is very strong, you do seem to rely on it a little too much. Work on your description, and I'm sure that you'll see a big improvement in your writing.

All together this is much more readable than it was broken up in the forum.

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