Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss
When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) sweetgirl 2007-12-08 07:13:24 PM
I liked how you handle the qudditch field scene. Much better than canon. Little Ginny is already getting on my nerves. I hope her face freezes like that next time she glares at Hermione. I am curious to see how you make Luna now that she has been sorted into Griffyndor. I hope you push Ron more into the background. I mean he was insenstive to Harry about Hedwig. I mean even if he didn't know at least he could have been a little more symaphatic. At least Luna offered her condoelnces. Keep up the great work.
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Ginny will get what's coming to her, but certainly not from Harry. Draco and Pansy, on the other hand. . . .
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