Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) sweetgirl 2007-12-08 07:13:24 PM

I liked how you handle the qudditch field scene. Much better than canon. Little Ginny is already getting on my nerves. I hope her face freezes like that next time she glares at Hermione. I am curious to see how you make Luna now that she has been sorted into Griffyndor. I hope you push Ron more into the background. I mean he was insenstive to Harry about Hedwig. I mean even if he didn't know at least he could have been a little more symaphatic. At least Luna offered her condoelnces. Keep up the great work.

Author's response

Ginny will get what's coming to her, but certainly not from Harry. Draco and Pansy, on the other hand. . . .

"T"

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