(#) Angel 2007-12-09
great story I really love the Axl crying and Izzy trying to control Axl.
Now see I just gave you a great review on you're story. At least you can be nice to me. We're not all perfect. There just stories.
I'm glad you liked it, but I can point out at least three errors just reading your sentence. Honestly, you seem to have no grasp at all of the English language. I could understand if you're not a native speaker, but I highly doubt that's the case, as your writing is nothing but painful to read; you got my criticism in my other review, I don't think I need to repeat myself anymore.