Hey guess you got my big long ranting comment, lol. I feel bad, it wasnt horrible and the only reason I was disapointed was because I loved the story so much that I wanted a proper and not so confusing story line/ending. I love this story, and the gore was cool, Im not just in it for the fluff, its cute but i like more substance. The only reason I said anything was the problem I had with understanding where you were taking it and what was going on. You were constantly changing the plot and setting and I didnt get it. I couldnt keep track. But thats was it... nothing you did was wrote, it was written amazingly and was enjoyable to read, just confusing and all over the place. I love your writing, dont change it for other people. Do what you want, not what other people want. I was just expressing an opinion.