Review for Another Pretty Number
Another Pretty Number
(#) asherschick 2007-12-23 06:14:04 AM
Yay! I get to be the first one to review. When I'd read your review of my story, I had gotten so excited and wanted to read a story of yours but sadly there seemed to be none.
When I saw this story at the top of the page and your name as the author, I was so happy! Now that I've read it, I think you should have started writing sooner. You seem to be a good observer (especially of details), you notice things around you and reflect them on the page perfectly, using your own way with words.
The plot is really interesting and original. I want to know what happened in those fourteen years, and exactly what kind of a relationship Dante and Gerard have. So, please write more soon!
When I saw this story at the top of the page and your name as the author, I was so happy! Now that I've read it, I think you should have started writing sooner. You seem to be a good observer (especially of details), you notice things around you and reflect them on the page perfectly, using your own way with words.
The plot is really interesting and original. I want to know what happened in those fourteen years, and exactly what kind of a relationship Dante and Gerard have. So, please write more soon!
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