Honestly can't see how you had trouble with the dialogue; I personally I think that you did a brilliant job. I mean we can't know the band members EXACT speech patterns and such, but I'm sure we've all watched enough interviews to catch the general jist, and your writing seems to hit the spot.
I also love your original characters, and how you pay attention to detail. Defne is thrilling me, you keep mentioning her past in passing and I'd live to know more.
Hope you write some more soon, cause I can't wait to read it.
Author's response
Watching interviews really helps me write better and also makes me smile =)
Thanks for the compliments, I'm blushing. hehe. I think I'm going to write some more, soon. Tonight or maybe tomorrow...
I like diving into my character's pasts, I think our pasts make us who we are in the moment. So I'm trying to give glimpses here and there to make you guys understand the characters' personalities better...