wow, you've seriously got talent. It keeps appearing more and more in the chapters you write. You slowly are pulling out aspects from the first chapter and explaining little parts of small points here and there. It's amazing how you accomplish that. I absolutely love how your chapters flow in a way you would find a movie going from one scene to the next. I simply can't wait until the next chapter. :)
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thank you so much for the nice review. like seriously. i'm touched beyond words.