Review for A Horrible Thing to Do

A Horrible Thing to Do

(#) Novocaine 2007-12-30

Oooh...that adds onto A Day's Moment. The gritty, painful satisfaction at the end makes my eyes sparkle in a Dumbledore-esque fashion. Beautiful. The entire thing is revenge...shivers happily
I didn't see that coming, but I was so pleased when it did. The scene in the alley and the morning after was fantastic - the detail of her panties really gave it something extra.
Gorgeous.

Author's response

Ah, you've entered into the "Sasuke's a giant fuck up" series between Fairady and I. Er, you should really read Fairady's contributions to it. It don't make as much sense if you haven't.

So, in chronological order:

Special - http://www.ficwad.com/story/27959

A Horrible Thing to Do (Me)

Surprise - http://www.ficwad.com/story/48260

A Day's Moment (Me)

I'm happy with the series as a whole, but I wish we could find a way to organize the individual stories better so that they were all linked as one big story somehow. Eh. Life goes on.

Horrible Thing to Do is probably the darkest I've ever written. I usually try to redeem characters, and nope, it's not happening here. Everyone is just guilty as hell. Except Shinobiko. Since he's a just a kid. I wrap myself in hopeful fluff.