Review for you can keep my brother
you can keep my brother
(#) winnie_55 2007-12-31 07:48:50 AM
I still feel bad for Sky, even though she totally brought it on herself by dumping him and then not talking to him.
It's like watching your best friend being broken hearted (ok, so Im way too obsessed with this story now!)
But I have to say I am kinda glad Ali snapped and told her all that stuff, I just wish someone there had made her call him, the whole marriage thing could just be maade up shit and she should have rung him and listened to what really happened.
I really hope he didn't marry Liz, that would be off the scale stupid, even by Sky's standards!
Maybe he was wearing the ring like to prove to Sky that he still loves her? Please tell me he didn't get married!
Also, I think it's really cool that even though none of the band has been in the story for a while, it's still fantastic. Like it may be a My Chem fan fiction, but it's so much more than that. All the characters you have created are so believable and the plot is so amazing.
It's like watching your best friend being broken hearted (ok, so Im way too obsessed with this story now!)
But I have to say I am kinda glad Ali snapped and told her all that stuff, I just wish someone there had made her call him, the whole marriage thing could just be maade up shit and she should have rung him and listened to what really happened.
I really hope he didn't marry Liz, that would be off the scale stupid, even by Sky's standards!
Maybe he was wearing the ring like to prove to Sky that he still loves her? Please tell me he didn't get married!
Also, I think it's really cool that even though none of the band has been in the story for a while, it's still fantastic. Like it may be a My Chem fan fiction, but it's so much more than that. All the characters you have created are so believable and the plot is so amazing.
Author's response
Oh thank you!!! I just don't know what else to say but thank you! I'm really flattered!
I didn't really realize having no one from the band for a lot of chapters can really turn people off but you know even when your loved ones aren't the guys from MCR they aren't constantly in your life in every chapter so to speak...
I didn't really realize having no one from the band for a lot of chapters can really turn people off but you know even when your loved ones aren't the guys from MCR they aren't constantly in your life in every chapter so to speak...
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