Review for Love in Unexpected places
Love in Unexpected places
(#) xxACoalminexx 2008-01-01 04:49:36 PM
I really like the storyline, but I'm having a hard time figuring out who's saying what. I know you're done with this story, but you should probably go back and fix some of that...maybe everything one person says on the same line? with no space in between. Because it kind of throws things off, the way you have it now.
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