Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) winnie_55 2008-01-05 11:12:53 AM

Wow, this chapter was dramatic again. Thank you for updating so quickly, I couldn't stand the suspense from your evil cliffhanger!
At first I did wonder why Billy would let Sky just wander off on her own, but I guess she is a grown woman and she should be able to take care of herself.
The comparison between Gerard and Johnie was eerie.
Like if things had been even slightly different it could be Gerard drunk and homeless.
That was a sad realisation and kinda makes you realise that anyone could end up like that. Made me kinda melancholy!
Your writing always makes me think, I really like that.
You really are such a good writer.

Author's response

My cliffhanger wasn't evil! It was my one and only perfect cliffhanger! I was sooooo proud of it!!

And thanks for the compliment! It means a lot to me! I mean if I can people think and perhaps do something different about their lives the next day then it's awesome!

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