Review for I'll Be There
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-01-06 11:57:56 AM
Oh gosh, I can't stop laughing. I tend to laugh at things that normal people wouldn't laugh at. But I found that VERY funny!
But seriously--you are a good author. Don't doubt yourself. I like the story, it has a very good plot. You describe the emotions very well. Just one thing I'd watch out on is capitalization; some words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. But that's just a small technical thing, so keep writing!
And after reading your comment and reading through my story I realised I realy do tend to capitalize things taht don't need it. Thanks for pointing it out.
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