First off let me say that this is a diamond in a Pigs trough.
by which i mean this is one of the best fics ive ever read.
period.
although if you desire more people to view your fic then you should consider posting this on the FF.net as well as Ficwad.
you would obtain much more feedback on the story and more people would notice this story.
i hope you heed my suggestion and i eagerly await the next chapter.
Regards.
Warming The Soul