Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) Elfwyn 2008-01-10

Love Agatha making Dumbledore out to be a school boy and her a Puff. The Talk Like A Pirate was brilliant! Harry and Snape face off was fantastic and I love that Harry was the smart/mature one that settled it, though I would like to see Snape apologize for once. Can't wait for Stark to come over and find out what's going on, given that Harry told them about Quirrell. Just a few missed used words and or typos to watch for, other than that this story is awesome.

Author's response

- Dumble's gets far too much respect for something he did half a century ago. Since then all he's really done is screw up.

- Someone on the Caer Azkaban group noted that Talk like a Pirate Day was Hermione's birthday... it grew out of that.

- I have long thought the best way of dealing with Snape would be to shame him into acting his age. He isn't going to apologize, it's not in him.

- Tony shows up next chapter, somewhat less than happy with a certain headmaster.

- Oh, and those aren't missed words -or- typos, those are examples of my patented 'Type like a retarded Spider-Monkey' method of writing. It's a process I tell you.